thelordofcheese's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[FreeFall(final)]

Eye candy

Cool style. Animation was very fluid. Graphics weren't bad. Sound was clean, but it's just bg music. Eye candy, worth a watch.

darkelf2099 responds:

thank you...dont forget to tell you're friends:)

[Some guy vs. Mexican guys]

Not worth the time to watch it

ANOTHER MusVid... eh heh. What the music had to do with attempted genocide, I know not. Graphics were standard. Sound was clean. No real point and not that entertaining.

dookiemoole responds:

u know u love it

[Social Studies flash]

School is good

That's a pretty cool school project. I mean the idea and all. The graphics were pretty standard, but they synced. Demi-laughs for the gags. Sound quality needed evened out. Maybe learn to use Cool Edit Pro and take a little time while doing the voice work. Those improvements might have made this a 7 or 8.

dookiemoole responds:

k

[The Cheater]

meh

Graphics were below standard. Couldn't read some of the text at the beginning because of the lack of contrast. And Ooo boy, another music video. Yay. Storyline wasn't that bad. The bottle part actually made me cringe a little. In the EYE! It wasn't too bad, but it was nothing great.

dookiemoole responds:

but... it took me like 4 and a half months

[Drink Folgers!]

What did that have to do with coffee?

Again, you show that you can animate. However, this animation had nothing to do with the content of the, er, um... script. But most commercials don't, anyways. You should be in advertising. Of course, advertising would be a waste of talent. I'm gonna keep checking out your stuff to see if you can come up with a good script. I saw "Just Once" and that thing, even though you said it was a parody of a love story, you also said it was good. It was neither. And I love how you praise everyone for just saying "I like you. You are GRAET!" I read some of your review responses, and you cannot take constructive criticism. I even mentioned you in my profile!

dookiemoole responds:

dude calm down, i just joke around, i can definitely take criticism. just lately i've just kidna ignored bad reviews and just wrote funny responses. I guess text cannot show emotion :(

[Just Once]

Technical achievment, virtual sucking

Good art and effects most of the time. That song bites a big one. Mouth didn't match up, either. Storyline was a snoozer. Sound at the end was horrible. You were laughing because you were so high that you thought that this was a good short overall. Get someone to give you a good script and I'm sure you'd make a dynamite flash.

dookiemoole responds:

a perfect representation of the usually apparent idiocy of humans