thelordofcheese's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Blocking Wall Worlds]

Standard platmormer

Floaty controls

joshuaskillsrobles responds:

Sorry about that. Ill try to make them better in my next jumping style game.

[The Recruiting Anthology]

Doesn't work

Blank screen after preloader play

[Dark Cut]

Not bad

Well, my health would not always replenish, and my final time was 48, but the score submission had it at 100. The vampire was porrly draw, which added to the camp of this game, and the rest was quite good. The use of layers was respectable. Once you clean up the code to eliminate faults it will be nice. A few more levels, too.

[giant game tutorial]

Ugly

sloppy.

We want to see the ActionScript in the tutorial. We don't want to have to open up a text editior to use the tutorial.

It's been done so many times. It's like you raped some of the best tutorials around and this is the retarded bastard child that was produced.

[Legend of Neuro]

Slow and silent

Needs more cowbell.

[teh block game]

Interesting maze game

could use an extra kick, but kept me entertained for a bit. And a different song after a while.

[Ostrich Jump 2]

A lottle slow, so a little boring

Thanks tom or whoever put it up? The users did! It's automated by the score this flash got based on user votes. Thank the users of NG!

So this was a little easy for my skill level. Maybe make a second version with a few added options. Something like keeping the gradual speed increase but in addition allow the player to speed up a few notches and be able to go back to the base speed. This will allow it to get faster a little quicker for the more advanced players. Also, you could then measure distance and time, and maybe have a scoring algorithm based on these criteria.

The-Mercenary responds:

nah, I have to thank tom. The game went by unnoticed so I asked tom play it and see if he likes it or not. And its on the FP now. As for the other stuff, there are 3 levels, the desert is the hardest one so try that level if you want something harder. As for the other suggestions, they would be great if I made the second one, but after being on the front page this long and only 14k views....yea its not doing too good.

[Stickrun Demo]

Too short

A 1 level demo that lasts as long as that won't last that long in the portal. More levels ore make them longer.

[XNeT Tutorials : Buttons]

Tutorials like this have been done MUCH better

the interface was nice, but why not actually size the textboxes for the code so that they display all of the code on the screen? Also, there were no examples of working code in some sections, just the text for the code. People want to see how things work and then want to see them working. Also, all of these can be found using a search engine and looking for Flash tutorial sites. Finally, all of these examples have been shown in other tutorial flashes that were fully functional and had better designed interfaces.